What is your proposed area of concentration and what do you plan to study within that concentration?

This is an admissions letter for a Master’s Program that I need help editing. Here are the questions I tried to cover in the essay:
What is your proposed area of concentration and what do you plan to study within that concentration?What attracts you to a distance learning program?What will you bring to this program?How might your work in this pogram help you to fulfill your personal or professional goals?